Battle Scars

Don’t judge that kid with her arms all scarred
Don’t brand that kid as bad
You never would have survived 
If you had the life she had
So say a prayer and show you care
She’s paid more than her share of dues
Don’t put her down or say bad things
Until you’ve walked that mile in her shoes
Those who suffered in war earn respect
They are greeted like super stars
She came from a war you wouldn’t understand
On her arms, the battle scars
Her own home was the battle zone
The desperation, feeling all alone
A situation she felt no escape from
Then late at night the urges come
Innocence lost like a bad dream
No self respect, no self esteem
It is an ongoing battle to feel whole
You can see the beauty within her soul
Sometimes I pray for a Judgement day
You have no heart if you look away
Flashbacks come and the anger stirs
The guilt she carries isn’t hers
There is a need for justice long past due
A need for acceptance from me and you
With anger, despair and fear demanding
The child needs some understanding
In spite of all the tears she cried
There are still battle scars deep inside
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Sullivan Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 5:23 AM
Wow Vince! Tears fill my eyes as I read this. It is so beautifully written. Finally someone who understands.
Ahmad Avatar
June 3, 2009 at 7:26 AM
It's touching. Beautifully written Vince.
Gass Avatar
March 11, 2009 at 8:52 PM
his poem is so moving, Vince. It went straight to my heart. Than God there are people like you in this world to help give these kids hope and to help their wounds heal. Excellent piece, Vince. Love, Robin
Jordan Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 7:22 PM
Vince I'll tell you the beauty of your heart shines in this poem - very profound message very clearly written - hopefully it will open some eyes and hearts - I commend you Vince - God Bless, YF4L, MJ
Loveless Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Great poem. THankyou for understanding, that is a gift greater than all. Just to let you know, as I read this while I was in school, it made me cry. Thankyou, again. Jese
Babcock Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 11:50 AM
So much truth in this. We have to walk that mile in someone's shoes before we know what they have gone through. An awesome write Vince. God Bless Phyl
Bingham Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 8:59 AM
Heavy, but that's what truth speaks, that is why so many turn to drugs and other escapes. Lord bless these little children and keep them safe and free from harm and bless Vince for championing such a worthy cause. Blessings, Ron
Kerrver Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 7:44 AM
Wow.your very good,I love poetry all kinds,but this is by far the most beautiful poem I ever read,good luck with your work,your great,keep up the good work.....
Winter Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 7:11 AM
I need to echo Carrie's sentiments, as I hold great respect for you and the work you do with abused children. This poem says so much, and it just hurts my heart to know and understand the horrors these children have suffered. A powerful, loving, giving write from the compassionate heart of a talented writer. Wish there were more people like you. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 6:55 AM
Compassion and understanding,...this poem says it well. I have noted from your comments on other poetry, Vince, that you have made a commitment to these troubled kids, and I honor and respect your dedication. They are fortunate to have you their friend, their advocate and for enlightening the rest of us....as a former teacher of little ones from troubled homes, I felt a longing to wrap them all up and bring them home with me so often. We need to do everything we can to help. God Bless...Carrie
Ginn Avatar
February 26, 2009 at 6:51 AM
Vince this screamed inside when I read it. This is the population I work with and sometimes they are so difficult and I have to remember to take a step back and see the scars. Wonderful eyes wide open writing. Id like to make a copy for my office if its okay. Laurie
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