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Battle Report To My Captain

Captain! Our soldiers have deceased on the battleground. Young youths! Yes, they were young boys! Their motionless figure lies on the ground. Crimson immortal stream shall never end flowing. Captain! They inhaled their ultimate breath, But it was a breath that packed their blood with fright. Several lack arms and limbs; Some are fragmented by showers of bullet; While others disintegrated into pieces. But don’t worry, For I directed a message to the Command center. They will ship a fresh division of troops immediately...

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Date: 9/9/2024 7:42:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/21/2016 3:25:00 PM
Rohan Nath, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/27/2015 2:53:00 PM
ROHAN, a pleasure to read :) hope you are enjoying the holidays ...... SKAT LOVE
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