Battle Rap

Battle Rap ...poet in da house... Now have a listen, for I’ll be a kissing…I’m on a mission And you’ll be a pissing your hemolysin…a smelly emission My words glisten worth the admission…full of ammunition You’re under submission a life in prison…meet the mortician Like a magician I’ll take over your vision…call your optician You’ll be wishing you had a cosmetician…here’s my aesthetician ~~~ Like Mohamed Ali sting you like a bee…crush you like a flea You’ll sing like a banshee on a screaming spree…cause I’m beastly Like Mike Tyson run you like a bison…your blood I’ll syphon Can’t handle my slicing with every word I ripen…I’m the word titan Like Frank Sinatra and his mafia from Italia…will give you insomnia In my euphoria and with your apaxia…you’ll be living with anoxia ~~~ You’re an agitator I’m a decorator…a word builder an innovator I’m a verse creator a rebuilder renovator…a word generator I have ambition you need a beautician…an ugly position In my coalition you need permission…luck with the audition I’m not a hater just much greater…a smooth operator Like a Terminator I’ll see you later…your exterminator ~~~ I’LL BE BACH!!! I'm not really a rapper...just having fun lol May.16.2018 8 Mile Style Poetry Sponsored by: Nick Trim
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Date: 5/21/2018 9:22:00 AM
You's a rapper, in disguise, but you don't fool wise guys, no lies, you don't even tries(ok that was very poor) loved this fun poem WW!
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Date: 5/18/2018 10:52:00 AM
I love your rapping, ^WW^, a well painted scene. Good luck in the contest… Thank you for reading " The Old Elf Poet Awaits At the River's Edge ".. hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 5/17/2018 7:05:00 PM
I can live with that, wat ya call it, BATTLE RAP? Well, I have to tell I think it's; hey don't preempt! I'm not like that, you're the baddy! Me, sweet, as sweet maple sap. I'm really not a rapper either, but I do think if the truth be known, your words, seeds of a winner sown! Mick
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Date: 5/17/2018 4:53:00 PM
wow, you did SUPER GREAT, WW. For sure a win!!!
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:18:00 AM
Made me smile, WW. With your vocabulary, no rapper could compete:)
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Date: 5/17/2018 9:25:00 AM
For NOT being a rapper...you brought da game! A topper on the charts! Fave!
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Date: 5/17/2018 6:59:00 AM
Very clever WW. Names of famous people aptly wrapped in your battle rap. Hope you win BIG.
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Date: 5/16/2018 10:29:00 PM
I love this! You have a very creative mind. --which is true about a lot of soupers on here, but this verse in particular is very fun, unique and creative. I'd like to hear an audio of you rapping! Haha. Very very cool. Always, Laura
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