Battle Rap

Let’s take this outside
Your turn to be objectified
Necktied offside and brutified
Come step outside
Where you can no longer hide
Now you and me can collide

You’re worse than godzilla’s bride
Torpefied and vilified
Uglified, mean and evil-eyed
Always snide and undignified

Ringside, in your false pride
the eyes of Hitler recognized
Executing his genocide
Feeling justified nationwide

Lately I’ve been preoccupied
With thoughts of homicide
Accident by countryside
broadside you flip side 
See you land in the fireside
For all the misery aside
you put me through - testified

Is your meanness really classified
I’m no longer taking it - qualified
I‘m no longer hiding it - quantified
No more excuses - are you satisfied?

Germicide and pesticide
Have you ever tried
To drink a ton of formaldehyde
To soften up your cowhide

Now we can go back inside
Your reign of terror on override
You’re toast and you’re fried
You’re been hogtied and humanified
Stupefied and rectified 
Just as prophesized



AP: Honorable Mention 2025, Honorable Mention 2025

Submitted on May 16, 2018 for contest 8-MILE STYLE POETRY CONTEST sponsored by NICK TRIM  -  RANKED 4TH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Gauthier Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 1:39 PM
Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:51 AM
You done good, congrats on a fine win.
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Thank, Richard. Much appreciated.
Talbot Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Brilliant... You really were givin it... Rappin mean and nasty... But hey im'a resilient... Next time it'll be me dats... Brilliant... As is, no hesitations... Please accept my congratulations. ;-) Mick
Gauthier Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:28 AM
LOL Mick, you are brilliant so your compliment means a lot. Thanks.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Nicely written!
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 8:53 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 7:19 AM
I am so glad I am on your friendified side! This poem is amazinglified.
Gauthier Avatar
May 17, 2018 at 8:04 AM
The bark is much scarier than the bite. You're safe. LOL
Cunningham Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 5:07 PM
Wow, that certainly told them Line.lol. Good luck. Tom.
Gauthier Avatar
May 16, 2018 at 5:21 PM
LOL Tom - best stay on my good side. You don't have to worry. LOL
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