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Battle Rap

Let’s take this outside Your turn to be objectified Necktied offside and brutified Come step outside Where you can no longer hide Now you and me can collide You’re worse than godzilla’s bride Torpefied and vilified Uglified, mean and evil-eyed Always snide and undignified Ringside, in your false pride the eyes of Hitler recognized Executing his genocide Feeling justified nationwide Lately I’ve been preoccupied With thoughts of homicide Accident by countryside broadside you flip side See you land in the fireside For all the misery aside you put me through - testified Is your meanness really classified I’m no longer taking it - qualified I‘m no longer hiding it - quantified No more excuses - are you satisfied? Germicide and pesticide Have you ever tried To drink a ton of formaldehyde To soften up your cowhide Now we can go back inside Your reign of terror on override You’re toast and you’re fried You’re been hogtied and humanified Stupefied and rectified Just as prophesized Submitted on May 16, 2018 for contest 8-MILE STYLE POETRY CONTEST sponsored by NICK TRIM - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 6/24/2018 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 1:39:00 PM
Thanks, Susan. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/23/2018 7:51:00 AM
You done good, congrats on a fine win.
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thank, Richard. Much appreciated.
Date: 6/22/2018 10:21:00 PM
Brilliant... You really were givin it... Rappin mean and nasty... But hey im'a resilient... Next time it'll be me dats... Brilliant... As is, no hesitations... Please accept my congratulations. ;-) Mick
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Date: 6/23/2018 7:28:00 AM
LOL Mick, you are brilliant so your compliment means a lot. Thanks.
Date: 5/17/2018 8:37:00 AM
Nicely written!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/17/2018 8:53:00 PM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/17/2018 7:19:00 AM
I am so glad I am on your friendified side! This poem is amazinglified.
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Date: 5/17/2018 8:04:00 AM
The bark is much scarier than the bite. You're safe. LOL
Date: 5/16/2018 5:07:00 PM
Wow, that certainly told them Line.lol. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 5/16/2018 5:21:00 PM
LOL Tom - best stay on my good side. You don't have to worry. LOL

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