Battle of the Case

Harsh! The  asphalt  sac circumscribes my spirit
   drowning  the  spectacle of sapphire ambiance
   That whirls a blue crush over my suntanned face,
    whose temples are rippling with shimmering grin
    And ,merry bustling the spontaneous chills smothering
    my qua-spirits yet  spray a  fiery  furnace of detesting 
    Scandinavian epidermal  whimpering over my incongruous
    antics with  the  talismanic  chemist  ritualistically rebirthing
   my  vexed  spirit  chaffed  away  with  enduring  rejection  of
    a  taciturn corps that writhed aggravatingly for  it  dresses 
   a  being  that is obvious of a race,say human identity....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
April 25, 2025 at 11:53 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 10:17 PM
BAGUMA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Always with LUV **SKAT**
Roger  Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 10:52 AM
This is great i love it, it has great imagery
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