Battle of Man

The eternal battle of mind and soul,
has waged since the dawn of man
it will be a battle that is fought for ever and ever until the mind can stop trying to
fool the heart.
If the mind and heart ever decide to work together that is where you are able to achieve
greatness.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dionne Avatar
December 25, 2010 at 2:04 AM
please feel free to critique even though i will keep the feeling in the poem i wonder if there is a way to make it flow better
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