Battered

It was when I saw in the eyes of well-built men
The battered soul and the tear-soaked eyes
And the cries of women reached to the peak
Of the world’s calmest seas
That I realized life indeed is a blink of an eye
For the children cry in hopeless agony
And there’s no warm touch to put to sleep.
After Haiyan battered the cozy homes,
I expected a repair-session by next morn
But they couldn't fix their ruined hope,
And even I broke my hopeful spirit.
I pitied them, and deep in my heart
I wept of silent tears,
A tearless grief,
That the people of my nation in the south
Fell to a fathomless doom.

A tribute for the Haiyan victims in PH.
We remember the anniversary, and now another super typhoon heads to the battered land. May God put our people safe.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/4/2014 4:12:00 AM
This is so gripping John, Very well written in deed. My heart goes out to all the lost and to their loved ones left behind. God Bless Kevin Kevin
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John Rey Canon
Date: 12/9/2014 2:10:00 AM
Thank you Kevin. It's very much aprreciated
Date: 12/4/2014 3:30:00 AM
Nice pen John but so sad! So sorry about all the suffering in your land my dear friend. May tensions and things get better over there.Have a lovely day! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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John Rey Canon
Date: 12/9/2014 2:11:00 AM
A hug for you too Dorian, I appreciated your words.
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