Baton

Baton Within Baton is a scroll The teachings of a life. The scribe of history The makings of who you are today. Bestowing elegance, discovery and comfort. Air between the reeds brings a Mother’s peace. A smile, a soft gesture, conveys a Father’s direction. Coalescing fibers link a Crest. Stand tall. Accept the honor of Lineage. Begin your history. Begin your scroll. A well orchestrated pass Hand to Hand Baton has been delivered.

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/4/2010 4:55:00 PM

Well done and written..very good flow to it and good expressions...Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/3/2010 10:17:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cie. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 7/2/2010 7:03:00 AM

This is excellent and reminds me of the Greeks passing the Baton. I like the essence of this poem and hopefully the scroll is filled with knowledge to impart upon us. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/1/2010 10:01:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation.. AlohA..