Bathroom Troubles

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I had trouble using the bathroom Nothing would come out--no zoom I would have to sit Straining a bit Feeling awful like I’m in doom Russell Sivey

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Date: 7/30/2017 9:10:00 PM

Ok, keep it in the bathroom. hahaha. Fun read, Russell

Date: 7/30/2017 4:54:00 PM

Don't know which is worse that or diarrhea..Thanks for the visit to my page..Well, at least it is a nice loo..Sara

Date: 7/30/2017 1:20:00 PM

sure gave me a giggle Russell its great to see your pen isn't suffering from constipation lol:-) hugs jan xx

Date: 7/30/2017 12:52:00 PM

Hilarious my friend, Russell! Still smiling!

Date: 7/29/2017 4:06:00 PM

That was a hearty laugh! Thanks for brightening the day.

Date: 7/29/2017 9:27:00 AM

Nice! (The lim'rik, not the dilemma:-) Cheerios! ~ john

Date: 7/29/2017 9:06:00 AM

....like the constipated mathematician ....he worked it out with a pencil....Thanks for the somewhat uncomfortable giggle....

Date: 7/29/2017 9:01:00 AM

See............. you can do it!!! Good one Mr. R! Write more... I'll be watching for them!!!