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Bathroom Troubles

I had trouble using the bathroom
Nothing would come out--no zoom
I would have to sit
Straining a bit
Feeling awful like I’m in doom

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Ok, keep it in the bathroom. hahaha. Fun read, Russell
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 4:54 PM
Don't know which is worse that or diarrhea..Thanks for the visit to my page..Well, at least it is a nice loo..Sara
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 1:20 PM
sure gave me a giggle Russell its great to see your pen isn't suffering from constipation lol:-) hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 12:52 PM
Hilarious my friend, Russell! Still smiling!
Kiser Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 4:06 PM
That was a hearty laugh! Thanks for brightening the day.
Flats Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:27 AM
Nice! (The lim'rik, not the dilemma:-) Cheerios! ~ john
Lawless Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:06 AM
....like the constipated mathematician ....he worked it out with a pencil....Thanks for the somewhat uncomfortable giggle....
Ellison Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:01 AM
See............. you can do it!!! Good one Mr. R! Write more... I'll be watching for them!!!
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