Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

Notes About The Poem

Bathing Beauties

~The wave breaks
gently, caressing
over and over
it strokes
the rocky shore.
The shore
trembles
wet
ready
silvery
but mute.
The storm
glowers
angering the sea:
back-talk
leads to back
hands,
and the shore
maudlin
retreats.~

Large ~
boulders
break with the tides
of time, to slivered
shards all glistening wet.
golden in a new dawn
once whole now
 broken by the tide
still there's
beauty,
yet.~


*see about the poem

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Robert Pettit February 4, 2014 at 11:36 PM Your words described the accompanying picture quite well. Light and love to you as well, Debbie!

Cherl Dunn February 4, 2014 at 6:50 PM Love the use of your imagination, it explodes with the power of the sea and it's wonderment. Nature at it's raw force unleased, great job. This write shines with a brilliance all it's own, loved every line and word expression. cheri thank you also for your review of yellow.

Roy Jerden January 17, 2014 at 8:03 PM Beautiful imagery, Debbie. Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!

Joe Maverick January 12, 2014 at 6:25 PM Enjoyed the metaphors and imagery here Debbie; this shows out well on various levels the sort of write that really appeals to me..'

Donna Jones January 2, 2014 at 5:43 PM Enjoyed your poem and its picture this evening Debbie...I felt an intermix of human emotions in there...awesome

Peter Dome December 31, 2013 at 7:04 PM Nicely done Debbie well done. take care. Pete.

Joseph May December 31, 2013 at 5:42 PM well penned Debbie..I liked the transition from gentleness to the storm to the beauty of the broken pieces at storms end..hugs

James Marshall Goff December 31, 2013 at 7:03 AM Love the yin-yang of the breaking waves...metaphor galore....nice! Jim