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~The wave breaks gently, caressing over and over it strokes the rocky shore. The shore trembles wet ready silvery but mute. The storm glowers angering the sea: back-talk leads to back hands, and the shore maudlin retreats.~ Large ~ boulders break with the tides of time, to slivered shards all glistening wet. golden in a new dawn once whole now broken by the tide still there's beauty, yet.~
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Date: 2/4/2014 11:36:00 PM
Your words described the accompanying picture quite well. Light and love to you as well, Debbie!
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Date: 2/4/2014 6:50:00 PM
Love the use of your imagination, it explodes with the power of the sea and it's wonderment. Nature at it's raw force unleased, great job. This write shines with a brilliance all it's own, loved every line and word expression. cheri thank you also for your review of yellow.
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Date: 1/17/2014 8:03:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, Debbie. Thanks for participating in the Kintsukuroi contest!
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Date: 1/12/2014 6:25:00 PM
Enjoyed the metaphors and imagery here Debbie; this shows out well on various levels the sort of write that really appeals to me..'
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Date: 1/2/2014 5:43:00 PM
Enjoyed your poem and its picture this evening Debbie...I felt an intermix of human emotions in there...awesome
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Date: 12/31/2013 7:04:00 PM
Nicely done Debbie well done. take care. Pete.
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Date: 12/31/2013 5:42:00 PM
well penned Debbie..I liked the transition from gentleness to the storm to the beauty of the broken pieces at storms end..hugs
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Date: 12/31/2013 7:03:00 AM
Love the yin-yang of the breaking waves...metaphor galore....nice! Jim
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