Bather

BATHER

She’s naked
Well? – perception naked
Existing with them all
In an obscure, spray-saturated atmosphere
An almost steamy dimension.
The poly-synthetic, strained drip
Along her streaming, rubber thighs
A chemical blue become plunge
Become weird, relaxed intensity
And those shouts!
Lay about
Shout!
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Michelle Mac Donald

August 14, 2012 at 3:33 PM

Wow, I'm trying to figure out what this write is about, Daver. Not about a tree, for sure...I'm afraid to give an "emperor's new clothes" response! You've tailored quite an interesting write here, Daver!:) Best wishes, Love, Mikki

Daver Austin

August 14, 2012 at 3:54 PM

It's strictly an impression inspired by a sexy female bather, and how the surroundings affect the senses of the observer. Actually, no explanation is necessary. The impression is left up to the reader. Love, daver

Mohammad Yamin

August 14, 2012 at 3:04 PM

Very vivid and enticing description of bather. Well done. Amazing work. Thanks for your kind remarks on my poem Let There Be Light. I admire your judgement. Regards

Krystal Cochrane

August 14, 2012 at 2:14 PM

Love this line: "An almost steamy dimension."

Andrea Dietrich

August 13, 2012 at 7:40 PM

david, I like the imagery in this one but it's kind of hard for me to understand a few of the lines. Anyway, she sounds like a very interesting bather.