Bathe Him In Fingertips

Fingertips play upon your skin
An oiled caress of tranquility 
Tea lights dancing like fluted whims
Relieving the days hostility  

Your muscles bound in tensions vice
Neath kneading hands must yield 
Surrender now you braids of strife
By my tempered force to heal

My hands pause in deep listening
Over the landscape of your ravaged terrain 
Anointing oils of clove left glistening
My touch the oasis for your pain

Your body ignored too long for touch
These hands hold a vocabulary of moves
To soften all those hardened edges
When flesh cries out to be smoothed

Like watercolor poetry you melt
With moans to be envied by lovers
Nurturing pleasure and comforts pelt
With emotions yet to discover

Pressing lightly upon your temples
Bathing my fingertips in your hair
I hear you sigh with slightest tremble
The sullen purging of buried cares

Such love is this received 
Unmatched but by its giver
For no rapture given nor ache relieved
Then to love him with the tips of my fingers

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/22/2013 4:17:00 PM
- A very beautiful poem Sarai !!!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2013 2:38:00 PM
Many thanks sweet Anne - Lise. Hugs galore!
Date: 11/22/2013 3:22:00 PM
This is intense. Does this really happen? I'll take your word, but it's hard to remember. At least till now!
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2013 2:37:00 PM
Hello Mark, thanks for commenting... Glad I could jog your memory. Show your lady the poem as a hint for Christmas gifts maybe? Wishing you Santa's best!
Date: 11/22/2013 12:58:00 PM
Okay... you got me with, "Fingertips play upon your skin"!!! It was all downhill from there!!! LOL PHEEEEWWWWWW and holy crap and all that stuff! My loins are on fire!!!! LOL MORE, MORE, WANT MORE!!! xoxoxoxox times a hundred!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/26/2013 3:15:00 PM
A world of "Loins On Fire" Hmmm sounds like a poem! LOL! It's the only place to be dear Sarai!!! xoxox
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2013 2:28:00 PM
Now Jack you and I both know you live in this world of loins on fire perpetually hahaha. Huge thanks! Cuddly hugs always dear one xoxox
Date: 11/22/2013 8:42:00 AM
GOOSEBUMPS!!!!!!!!! Holy goodness, what I would give to feel this right now. Sensually eloquent...
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Sarai Virden
Date: 11/23/2013 2:25:00 PM
Oh for the wanting my friend... I hope you get spoiled like this often! Hugs always
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