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Bathe

Before bed, have a hot

Bath with berry-scented

Bubbles or some perfumed

Bath salts.  Lose your stress or

Be sensuous! Enjoy 

Bliss!  Better yet, at the

Beach, bathe in the warm sun!


Written Aug. 16, 2016 for Km Merryman's  Pleiades B Poetry Contest

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Beautiful Scars Date: 9/6/2016 6:40:00 AM you make me want to go relax in the bath now lady! I love my baths lol I would rather take a bath than bathe in the sun for some reason! beautifully written and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 8/21/2016 1:20:00 PM Nothing better than a relaxing bath, Andrea, if you can afford the time! No problem with the beach; I go swimming regularly, but have learnt to avoid extra sun exposure. Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/20/2016 9:38:00 PM Congrats on your win Andrea Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 8/20/2016 9:05:00 AM Relaxing imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply

Sushma A. Singh Date: 8/20/2016 8:44:00 AM Congrats! Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/20/2016 4:25:00 AM I am happy your poem did so well Andrea. Congratulations! ; ) 7 Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 8/19/2016 8:03:00 PM Andrea, congrats on your win! Reading your relaxing poem made me want to stop what I was doing and run a bubble bath. Blessings! Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/19/2016 5:35:00 AM Ah! What a way to relax at the end of the day:) Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 8/17/2016 4:07:00 PM Ahhhh, there is nothing like a hot bath to relax the body. I love your entry Andrea. I'm sure this will do really well in the contest! ; ) 7 Login to Reply

Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 8/17/2016 11:54:00 AM Great...how relaxing and full of bilss...bathe...well expressed! :) Sunita Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 6:41:00 AM - Lovely written, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 8/17/2016 1:32:00 AM I need both the bath and the swim : ). Manytimes I take a quick shower.I do need to fill that tub with soapy water..and I am tomorrow heading for the beach with my childhood bestfriend and our kids..Wish you could join us dear. : ) Lovely poem. Login to Reply

Lynn Marie Date: 8/16/2016 10:17:00 PM An upbeat piece of rejuvenating charm! Delightful writing, a treat to read :-) My best to you in the contest blessings, lynn Login to Reply

John Hamilton Date: 8/16/2016 9:33:00 PM bbbbeautiful write. should do well nice flow! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 8/16/2016 9:25:00 PM Hi Andrea, It sounds sooo relaxing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 8/16/2016 9:18:00 PM Sounds blissful Andrea...Very nicely penned... Login to Reply