Notes About The Poem

Bathe

Before bed, have a hot

Bath with berry-scented

Bubbles or some perfumed

Bath salts.  Lose your stress or

Be sensuous! Enjoy 

Bliss!  Better yet, at the

Beach, bathe in the warm sun!


Written Aug. 16, 2016 for Km Merryman's  Pleiades B Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Scars Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 6:40 AM
you make me want to go relax in the bath now lady! I love my baths lol I would rather take a bath than bathe in the sun for some reason! beautifully written and congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
Callus Avatar
August 21, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Nothing better than a relaxing bath, Andrea, if you can afford the time! No problem with the beach; I go swimming regularly, but have learnt to avoid extra sun exposure. Congrats on this fine win. Regards // paul
May Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 9:38 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
Haight Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 9:05 AM
Relaxing imagery, Andrea. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Singh Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Congrats!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 4:25 AM
I am happy your poem did so well Andrea. Congratulations! ; ) 7
Merryman Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Andrea, congrats on your win! Reading your relaxing poem made me want to stop what I was doing and run a bubble bath. Blessings!
Daniel Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Ah! What a way to relax at the end of the day:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 4:07 PM
Ahhhh, there is nothing like a hot bath to relax the body. I love your entry Andrea. I'm sure this will do really well in the contest! ; ) 7
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 11:54 AM
Great...how relaxing and full of bilss...bathe...well expressed! :) Sunita
Andresen Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 6:41 AM
- Lovely written, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chircop Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 1:32 AM
I need both the bath and the swim : ). Manytimes I take a quick shower.I do need to fill that tub with soapy water..and I am tomorrow heading for the beach with my childhood bestfriend and our kids..Wish you could join us dear. : ) Lovely poem.
Marie Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 10:17 PM
An upbeat piece of rejuvenating charm! Delightful writing, a treat to read :-) My best to you in the contest blessings, lynn
Hamilton Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 9:33 PM
bbbbeautiful write. should do well nice flow!
Y. Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Hi Andrea, It sounds sooo relaxing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest-7:-) Alexis
May Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 9:18 PM
Sounds blissful Andrea...Very nicely penned...
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace