Bath

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Fast river the Avon running to Bath beautiful with snow when I first met the unknown walking slow

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Sotto Poet

Date: 12/19/2023 10:21:00 AM

A delightful Ninette, Maria. The poem captures the essence of a swift-flowing river, the Avon, as it winds its way toward Bath, adorned with a picturesque blanket of snow at this leisurely pace.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/19/2023 12:27:00 PM

Yes, dear Sotto. I've been exactly in that bridge over the Avon. Thanks a lot for your words. Really appreciated.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/18/2023 3:18:00 PM

a lovely Ninette, Maria, with some soft images...soft like your poetic voice. Have a lovely evening, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/18/2023 3:25:00 PM

Sara, I must thank you. This is something especial for me, when I visited there. Have a nice evening Sara/Love/Maria

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/18/2023 3:03:00 PM

just wo.anderful Maria, i visited this place in 1988, had a romance there but no regrets, thanks for the touching images

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 12/18/2023 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Yann. You had a romance there? Naughty boy. Anyway my dear friend, just a joke. Nice Bath, I've been there too but much later. Beautiful place, as your words are. Bissousxxx