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bat

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Bat View

ups down
downs up

sky sea
flipped

hour glass
times up

heels now
top heads

trees hang
by roots

mountains
dangle

smoke leaks
earthward

heaven's
under

above
is hell

over
is down

done is
brushed on

on the
up down

bat view
imbues
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Allison Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 5:00 PM
wonderful imagery John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Anderson Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 6:33 PM
Thanks very much. Cheers
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:00 PM
Great imagery ,John , congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:10 PM
Thanks heaps. Sad to see Brian's last contest. Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 9:53 AM
I enjoyed this bat's eye view!! Congrats, John.
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes
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