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Listen to poem:
ups down
downs up

sky sea
flipped

hour glass
times up

heels now
top heads

trees hang
by roots

mountains
dangle

smoke leaks
earthward

heaven's
under

above
is hell

over
is down

done is
brushed on

on the
up down

bat view
imbues

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Date: 8/30/2021 5:00:00 PM
wonderful imagery John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Anderson
Date: 8/30/2021 6:33:00 PM
Thanks very much. Cheers
Date: 8/28/2021 7:00:00 PM
Great imagery ,John , congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 7:10:00 PM
Thanks heaps. Sad to see Brian's last contest. Cheers
Date: 8/28/2021 9:53:00 AM
I enjoyed this bat's eye view!! Congrats, John.
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 11:01:00 AM
Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes

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