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ups down downs up sky sea flipped hour glass times up heels now top heads trees hang by roots mountains dangle smoke leaks earthward heaven's under above is hell over is down done is brushed on on the up down bat view imbues

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Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2021 5:00:00 PM

wonderful imagery John, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

John Anderson
Date: 8/30/2021 6:33:00 PM

Thanks very much. Cheers

Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2021 7:00:00 PM

Great imagery ,John , congratulations in your win in Brian's Footle contest. Hugs Eve

John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 7:10:00 PM

Thanks heaps. Sad to see Brian's last contest. Cheers

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2021 9:53:00 AM

I enjoyed this bat's eye view!! Congrats, John.

John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thanks very much. Cheers and Best Wishes