Bastard Sunrise

The Rough Slouching Beast has been born in Washington. Upon its birthing what bastard sunrise were we promised to relinquish our souls? What white dawn in darkness was actually immune cells rallying to fight a growing cancer? Now that it has begun metastasizing upon our national flesh, tell me, O toothless sages of our faith, what is your plan to restore our birthright of azure, blush mornings while we can still live to see them?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Sergi Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:43 PM
Very deep and profound, Dale . I'm in awe of this sunrise in context.!
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 3:21 PM
gosh Dale this is so powerful and the imagery is intense:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 4:06 PM
Thanks, Jan. I'd hoped that what I had to say would resonate with people.
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:37 PM
wowowow, I LOVE THIS. Amazing and a fave!
Cozart Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 6:05 PM
Gosh, Andrea, thanks so much!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 6:51 PM
Eye-catching title! Interesting write, Dale!
Lawless Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 8:34 AM
The title hooked me Dale. But we must remember there are bastards at sunset too. Well written with very sharp line breaks. Made me stop and think....which, I believe, means it succeeded.
Cozart Avatar
August 31, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thanks very much, John!
Pandit Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 4:46 PM
Very creative, Dale--lovely original thought--good ending--for now there are no answers!
Green Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 4:41 PM
This sounds a bit angry to me but I like it.
Cozart Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 4:44 PM
Hi, Chris. Nice to hear from you!
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