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Basking in His Vacancy

Content at night, I whisper to the haloed moon
telling Luna how softly her silvery light glows.
I'm comforted listening to a nightingale's croon
while through my window, a gentle breeze blows.

It's quiet now, in this house he and I once shared.
Half the furniture is gone, the pieces that he took.
Missing photos from walls. He left them half bared
when he moved out like the chess game piece, Rook

I smiled the morning he finally walked out the door
and indulged myself with the echoes of emptiness.
Silence instead of his footsteps I had come to abhor.
I was savoring the absence of his childlike pettiness.

Basking in his vacancy, happy being in my own space
without reasons for feeling angst and being annoyed.
I danced and sang songs about being in a happy place,
peacefully alone. More than ready to embrace the void.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Maverick Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 11:42 AM
Now the rooms have some va-voom.'
Lane Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 11:59 AM
;-) thanks ever so much, Joe. I read and appreciate your comment.
Bauer Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 1:14 PM
a powerful and very well-written poem with a great title, lin! best of luck in the contest...
Lane Avatar
May 24, 2026 at 11:56 AM
Thanks a lot, Ilene.
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 11:05 AM
Sadly it wasn't to be, better to be alone than treading on eggshells and being on edge all the time. Great entry for the contest Lin. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 11:10 AM
I walked delicately on eggs until I decided to break them all and do what was best for me. The best decision I ever made was to regain my freedom. Thanks a lot, Tom
Goldsmith Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 11:03 AM
Your "Basking in His Vacancy" is a  wonderful/powerful write. Lonely vs Loneliness are miles apart. Yes, we can be happy/peaceful alone. Sometimes that is what we need. I really enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" Have a blessed/great weekend writing away, Paula.............
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 11:09 AM
How very true are your wise thoughts, Paula. I can be as bush as I choose, doing several things I enjoy doing... doing absolutely nothing. lol Thanks!
Andresen Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 10:03 AM
- Sometimes loneliness is a better option ... and lonely doesn't have to be negative ... it's about enjoying your own company, Lin :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 11:07 AM
That's a fact, Anne-Lise. lol I really do enjoy my own company, answering to no one but myself. Thanks for the well wishes and weekend. I hope the same for you.
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:37 AM
Dear Linnersz, sometimes its best to be alone than be engrossed in pettiness, that could be annoying. What a seamless write! I love especially the opening lines where youv painted imagery like the artist within you really! So vivid and engaging! Beautifully articulated! breakups are never easy tho, and you’ve been very real here on how exactly the void feels. Pleasure reading. Best wishes. Sending you light always
Empress Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:53 AM
I never really resonated with people who say “ i am so lonely” loneliness is a state of mind, we can feel lonely while surrounded by many too: aloneness isn’t loneliness. And I sometimes like aloneness. I hear you linnersz
Lane Avatar
May 23, 2026 at 9:46 AM
I’ve found the truth in being alone brings contentment, not loneliness. I’m so pleased you realized the opening lines were setting the stage for contentment. Thank you!
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