Poetprentice Dupins Poet Cinquain

Basically, the Same Thing

Riot
                                                   Violent, Chaotic
                                            Burning, Fighting, Running
                                              Voices of the oppressed
                                                     Revolutionary


                                                           Patriot 
                                                      Duty, Freewill
                                           Bombing, Killing, Occupying
                                                    I love my country
                                                           Soldier 


                                                            Peace
                                                     Unreal, Illusive
                                         Talking, Disagreeing, Defending 
                                                       Pie in the Sky
                                                             War


                                                          Factories
                                                   Routine, Processed  
                                        Evaluating, Regulating, Producing  
                                                  It’s about the money
                                                           School

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Teddy Kimathi April 7, 2017 at 8:27 AM A very philosophical piece, which attracts a conversation....... Congrats for your WIN with this brilliant piece!! ;-) Poetprentice Dupins April 7, 2017 at 8:43 AM Thank you!

Beautiful Scars April 6, 2017 at 3:59 PM I found this very thought provoking and intriguing. ..great poem...thank you and congrats... Poetprentice Dupins April 7, 2017 at 8:43 AM You're welcome and thank you as well!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 11, 2017 at 4:18 PM Creative, artful, thought provoking and intelligent write. Poetprentice Dupins March 15, 2017 at 1:09 PM Thanks! The last cinquain to me, speaks volume.