Basho Wrote It Like This
Basho wrote it like this...
in autumn moonlight
the worm digs so silently
into the chestnut
If I were Basho I might write it like this...
in the desert heat
coyotes scream so wildly
echo through the sage
both haiku - 5/7/5
(coyotes - pronounced ky-oats)
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