Baseball Card

And there you were - 
blue cap and jersey, white pants
bat held high above the shoulder
cocked and ready to swat one out
in that perfect stance of yours...
Shoulder turned, name half visible
(Proud you were to wear that name
Proud was I you wore that name)

Yes there you were - 
smiling that smile of yours...
Cocky, confident, ready-or-not smile
The kind of smile of someone who
was exactly where he belonged
exactly where he wanted to be
in that very place, that very moment
doing what he was born to do
Fulfilling his destiny...

(Yes that's my boy out there
Yes he IS a good player isn't he?)

So there you were - 
An all-star you were, oh yes, a star
a shining, glittering star but:
Stars are born to flame out, die
We are all born to die it is said
Seems only the best of us die young
and far too soon, too soon
You died too soon...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Thomas Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 6:13 AM
A great baseball poem about you child, the baseball player, who died young and too soon. The pain doesn't last forever, but the proud memories certainly do. Nice poem.
Kroll Avatar
September 26, 2017 at 9:08 AM
So well written. Your love and pride shine through the grief. Blessings, Kathy
Burch Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 5:23 PM
Helloooo Tyrone!! ;) What a marvelous memorial you have penned! So painfully well done Big Hugggs my friend. Delia
Neumann Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 4:55 AM
This is so proud and so sad. i am sending you many healing wishes, Kai
Vinson Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:55 PM
Ah Tim, so well done. I wonder about the tendency to "flame out"...
White Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Very sad poem, but still congratulations on your win.
Rodgers Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Sad and poignant, congrats on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 6:41 AM
So sad, Tim! My heart sinks... Congrats on your win!
Garcia Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Stirringly sad and beautiful at the same time. Very well done. I didn't expect to find cause to wipe away tears while judging these but reading your poem was well worth it. Congrats
Ryerson Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 3:23 PM
Thanks for the placement Philip! It's a true honor - Tim
Capitano Avatar
March 1, 2017 at 5:23 AM
A sad nostalgic tale Tim, well done. Congrats.
Merryman Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 7:20 PM
Sweetly nostalgic yet so sad. Great write, Tim! Congrats on a well deserved win! Love, Kim
A   Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 5:38 PM
A WONDERFUL WRITE, BUT TRULY SAD.... TIM, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
Smith Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Tim this one got to me again...glad I got to reread it....congrats
A  Avatar
May 25, 2015 at 1:13 AM
Tim:) Congratulations, Love SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
May 24, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Wonderful writing cher! I'm sure many who have lost their sons have similiar wonderful memories and can really identify with this verse. If only they could stay children longer? Congrad's Light & Love
A   Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 4:19 PM
Tim, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
Stone Avatar
January 3, 2015 at 6:14 PM
It feels commemorative, very nice.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 3:44 PM
thanks again for telling me about this in soupmail. bless his soul.
Smith Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 10:25 AM
Very heartfelt but so beautiful my friend...We need to remember the good times and don't let them slip us by....Tim
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:22 AM
I've gotta fave this one.
Dietrich Avatar
December 29, 2014 at 12:21 AM
oh MY, did he die young, tim?? This is SO good. I love when you write like this. maybe this is fiction? Anyway, you should enter it in PDs "in the moment" contest. It surely fits there I think!! (did you get inspired by that theme of hers?)
Roper Avatar
December 28, 2014 at 9:18 PM
What a wonderful story and so sad, I'm sorry. Almost all my sons and grandchildren have played or playing baseball and softball, so I surely know that wonderful feeling of your love one outshining. Happy New Year with many blessings
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace