Baseball

Days of youth, spending time tossing that white pellet.
Learning how to play was sometimes heartless
as losses were an injury which was difficult to take.
As time went, so did the misunderstandings of the game,
but instead left a deeper love for its nuances.

Where to move on each play, who covered which base, 
cutoffs, and the defensive attitude in mind when on the field.
Looking to see if the coach had enough faith
to put your name in the lineup for that day's game. 

Every pitch became important.  Every batted ball became the
hit you wanted.  Every member of the team became your friend for life.
Don't let them down with an error or strikeout.  Be their hero
with the saving catch or drive in the winning run.  


   Baseball on green fields
   Pastime of all my summers
   All American game.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 4, 2017 at 11:58 AM
I am so happy to see this make the list Dan. This is a great haibun! Congratulations! ; )
Cwiak Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:02 AM
Thanks Connie. I reread some of yours to get the incorporation of words correct. I appreciate the help!
Roper Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 6:29 PM
Nicely done , Dan, baseball, softball is the entertain game around my family for years as my grandchildren exceed in the games ... Congratulations on your win ... ~*
Cwiak Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 4:01 AM
Thanks Eve. I have known the game from perspective of player, coach, and fan. My son never played, so I will not have that thrill. As a former coach, however, I will say that the kids really appreciate your following and encouragement. May their bats be filled with hits. Thanks, again.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Congrats, Dan! Green grass of a youthful summer!
Cwiak Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:40 AM
Thanks Kim. I'm a baseball fanatic and only wish I had more summers left in me than I have left behind. I appreciate your comments.
Hopkins-Drewer Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:43 PM
Ah the memories!
Cwiak Avatar
August 3, 2017 at 3:36 AM
At this point in life, memories are what keeps us going...(me at least). Thanks for the read and comment.
Cwiak Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 8:50 AM
Thanks Connie. I took a page from one of your poems to get this going. I really like the way yours flowed for this contest. Good luck !
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 30, 2017 at 9:01 PM
What clear memories you have of your youth or perhaps a vivid imagination. This is wonderful Dan! You have brought to light the dreams of a young boy searching to belong. : )
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