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To see the game, you have to plan It takes some time you see This is for all the die-hard fans You'll need a strategy To stand in line for baseball Can be a timely task You first must get the tickets To clear your way to pass Excitement now before the game Which section are you in? The dugout group or foul ball side Row 5, seats 9 and 10 Concession stands are all around Decide which should be first Tee shirts and hats or hot dogs You'll have to quench your thirst Now don't forget the plans you made Cause folks are filled with glee You'll drink your beer, your coke and sprite But then you'll have to pee Another line to wait in The porta potties blue Don't get distracted from your plan They'll jump in front of you Oh Wow! Another "homer" My team is going to win Can't wait for seventh inning stretch I have to pee again Great game it was they played today Our team is now the star We're tired but we have to go It's time to find the car

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Date: 1/28/2022 1:09:00 AM
"You'll drink your beer, your coke and sprite But then you'll have to pee" - Consequences of deeds. A very beautifully written poem on baseball game organizing in a hilarious and, more or less, sarcastic way. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2021 4:07:00 PM
I got a good laugh out of this one Neva. Loved the rhyme scheme too. Blessings, Susan Maree
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Date: 10/20/2015 4:03:00 PM
I hope this placed in the contest. iT IS REALLY CUTE! I have this problem at movies. Even if I go pee right before the movie, I still might end up having to go really bad an hour later. HOW I HATE THAT!!!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 10/21/2015 9:06:00 AM
Hey Andrea, thanks for stopping by and for your comments. It did place at #5 in the contest! There were some really great poems submitted too so I was honored that mine placed. I know how you feel though and sometimes you miss good parts of the movie! love and hugs to you.. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 9/1/2015 3:42:00 PM
You write so well. Another joy to read, the flow of your writing is an excellent pace (to me) ... CayCay
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Neva Romaine
Date: 9/2/2015 2:41:00 PM
Hey CayCay, you are a sweetie pie and I thank you so much for your visits and support. It means a lot to me. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 8/1/2015 3:39:00 PM
I like it. Thank you.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 8/3/2015 9:42:00 AM
Hey Christian, I am so pleased that you enjoyed my poem. Thanks for your kind words. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 8/1/2015 11:21:00 AM
I enjoyed this piece! I'm glad I didn't miss it. Congratulations on being featured.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 8/3/2015 9:41:00 AM
Hey Carol, I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your sweet comment. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/27/2015 12:07:00 AM
I felt like I was there, this is a home run in my books!
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Neva Romaine
Date: 6/1/2015 1:04:00 PM
Hey Richard, I do appreciate your very nice comments on my poem. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/26/2015 1:32:00 PM
I love baseball and I honestly enjoyed this read so very much Neva. Awesome write....Sharon G.
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/26/2015 3:37:00 PM
Hey Sharon, thank you so much for visiting me and for your lovely comments on my poem. Writing this was a lot of fun and great memories of the game we both love so much. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/26/2015 12:36:00 PM
Thank you for submitting your verse! It was fun to go to the game with you. Please do enter my next contest on summer fun! Congrad's Light & Love
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/26/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hey Debbie, thank you so much for choosing my poem as one of the winners in "Batter Up". It was fun to write this one, brought back a lot of memories of the game. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/25/2015 8:05:00 PM
Great write, Neva! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/26/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hey Kim, thank you so much for the congrats. I enjoyed writing it. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/25/2015 5:43:00 PM
NEVA, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/26/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hey Linda, thank you so much for the congratulations. I didn't know that I had won a place in Debbie's contest until I heard from you and Skat A. I never received a comment or any word from Debbie. This is great news and thanks again. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/25/2015 1:15:00 AM
Neva :) Congratulations, Love SKAT
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/26/2015 9:29:00 AM
Hey SKAT A, thanks so much for the congrats. I didn't know that I had placed in the contest until I heard from you. Be Blessed, Neva
Date: 5/20/2015 11:53:00 AM
- Hooray for your team! - A great poem - Good luck in the contest, Neva ! - // Anne-Lise :)
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Neva Romaine
Date: 5/21/2015 8:47:00 AM
Hey Anne Lise, thank you so much for visiting me and for your great comments on my poem. I do appreciate it very much. Be Blessed, Neva