Bartender

I swam through a ocean of illusion
Dying of thirst
Going through the motions of confusion
Fearing the worst
I came upon her canteen
Seeking a cup of real
If for nothing else
A sip for my last meal
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Andrews Avatar
June 2, 2024 at 9:35 PM
I can relate with you on so many levels. Thank you for sharing.
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 3:46 PM
The idea of drinking real is quite original. Good write!
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