Get Your Premium Membership

Barren Solitude

Deafening silence rips through the cold air From hollowed cries of desperation As knees bent from the bale of despair This emptiness is ripping thy soul Creeping darkness defile that gaping hole Seeking and longing for coveted attention Into the haze and desolation I stare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/12/2018 9:27:00 AM
Very nice poetic description of desolation..
Login to Reply
Medida Avatar
Jonathan Medida
Date: 9/13/2018 7:52:00 AM
thanks ms Karen
Date: 9/11/2018 7:05:00 AM
great poem but you didn't have to date so I placed you lower...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
Login to Reply
Medida Avatar
Jonathan Medida
Date: 9/13/2018 7:53:00 AM
thank you for appreciating my work, you're the first sponsor who had given me a placement on any contests. thank you

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry