Barren Solitude

Deafening silence rips through the cold air
From hollowed cries of desperation
As knees bent from the bale of despair
This emptiness is ripping thy soul
Creeping darkness defile that gaping hole
Seeking and longing for coveted attention
Into the haze and desolation I stare
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Da Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 9:27 AM
Very nice poetic description of desolation..
Medida Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 7:52 AM
thanks ms Karen
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September 11, 2018 at 7:05 AM
great poem but you didn't have to date so I placed you lower...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
Medida Avatar
September 13, 2018 at 7:53 AM
thank you for appreciating my work, you're the first sponsor who had given me a placement on any contests. thank you
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