Barren Solitude

In the thicket condensed in faraway desolate island silence is the petrified breeze that forgets to blow. Night drizzles on twilight gleam, darkens the sand. The moon, a lone voyager across stellar satin sky, sprinkles silver dust of solitude on the canopy high, dribbles with patina of leaves on the ground below. Serene sea sees the show of barren solitude grand. I drink the elixir of solitude as mist of time engulfs me, my heart beats in the tune of serenading still delight, the mute music turns into rippling pulses of ecstasy. My mind is the dusk that soaks the setting sun’s hue, that’s what the island called life waits always to view. As sound of the wheels of time fades in desolate night, in placid depth of inner sea I hear my soul speak to me.
August 18, 2018 Edited September 15, 2020 Contest : Completely Your Choice (9) Sponsor : Brian Strand
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Kauffman Avatar
April 8, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Very lovely Sublimal - so many vivid images! Congratulations on your first place win!
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December 10, 2018 at 7:54 PM
Beautiful, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
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October 8, 2018 at 8:42 AM
This excellent, WINNING poem paints a vivid picture, Subimal! Janice
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Gauthier Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 8:31 PM
Back with more congrats, Subimal.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:03 AM
Many thanks, Line.
Faulkner Avatar
October 7, 2018 at 6:56 PM
Such a beautiful write on solitude, congratulations on your placement!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 3:03 AM
Thank you, Michelle.
Scars Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 6:05 AM
wowsers, the imagery, emotion, rhythm and rhyme...outstanding poem sweet Subimal...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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September 12, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thank you, Laura for placing the poem and for your words of appreciation.
Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 4:41 PM
A lovely poem, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 12, 2018 at 12:50 AM
Thank you, Line.
Dutta Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 6:35 AM
AMAZING Subimal! I am just spell bound. Your flow comes so easily as a running river. BIG CONGRATS to win top.
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September 4, 2018 at 12:03 AM
Thank you for your visit and for the nice comment.
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