Barren Solitude

In the thicket condensed in faraway desolate island silence is the petrified breeze that forgets to blow. Night drizzles on twilight gleam, darkens the sand. The moon, a lone voyager across stellar satin sky, sprinkles silver dust of solitude on the canopy high, dribbles with patina of leaves on the ground below. Serene sea sees the show of barren solitude grand. I drink the elixir of solitude as mist of time engulfs me, my heart beats in the tune of serenading still delight, the mute music turns into rippling pulses of ecstasy. My mind is the dusk that soaks the setting sun’s hue, that’s what the island called life waits always to view. As sound of the wheels of time fades in desolate night, in placid depth of inner sea I hear my soul speak to me.
August 18, 2018 Edited September 15, 2020 Contest : Completely Your Choice (9) Sponsor : Brian Strand

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Date: 4/8/2020 6:59:00 PM
Very lovely Sublimal - so many vivid images! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 12/10/2018 7:54:00 PM
Beautiful, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 10/8/2018 8:42:00 AM
This excellent, WINNING poem paints a vivid picture, Subimal! Janice
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/9/2018 1:17:00 AM
Thank you, Janice.
Date: 10/7/2018 8:31:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Subimal.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:03:00 AM
Many thanks, Line.
Date: 10/7/2018 6:56:00 PM
Such a beautiful write on solitude, congratulations on your placement!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/8/2018 3:03:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle.
Date: 9/11/2018 6:05:00 AM
wowsers, the imagery, emotion, rhythm and rhyme...outstanding poem sweet Subimal...Thank you for your participation and congrats on your placement..-luloo
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Date: 9/12/2018 12:50:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for placing the poem and for your words of appreciation.
Date: 9/8/2018 4:41:00 PM
A lovely poem, Subimal. Congrats on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/12/2018 12:50:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 9/2/2018 6:35:00 AM
AMAZING Subimal! I am just spell bound. Your flow comes so easily as a running river. BIG CONGRATS to win top.
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Date: 9/4/2018 12:03:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and for the nice comment.
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