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Barren Man

To vanish from this impious era i mind less conceivably recognised as a vain guest To the toiled years i duly  reminisce as futility proved my paramount best To this world i pleaded with a wail upon my arrival on its terrain  To serve me right till my departure but this it did did in miniature   To this world i pledged my prospective days but this it shattered in various ways To my exertion i'll personally extol if no being cites and applauds my effort To another realm i'll get deposed unceremoniously To what awaits me in the  subsequent world beyond i remain optimistic To the fatalists i now resign as their belief  obvioused in my instance To this notion i duly adhere perhaps my irrelevancy would be remedied at death

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/27/2014 3:50:00 AM
Thanks Y'all for the encouraging comments,I really appreciate....you guys should watchout for my next post tomorrow (Ambushed I ) a poem with RAPE as its subject matter,thanks
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:24:00 PM
Rotimi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/19/2014 7:49:00 AM
epic, I love the optimistic look...Rotimi . , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 1/19/2014 6:37:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Rotimi- I choose your first great poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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