Barren Hills

Barren hills,
And a wild fire burnt heart,
Ignites continuously.
Burnt are his beliefs
From his heart,
Burnt are his faith
From his body,
Ignites continuously
Burning everything.

-AveeHang
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Agustin Avatar
October 5, 2024 at 5:32 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:47 AM
This poem has a burning of her own. Well done!
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