Barren Branches of a Willow Tree Die

Stones stand erect like sentries keeping guard
   as I walk alone, with tear in my eye,
      through this deserted cemetery yard.
In the back corner stands my father’s grave;
   I sadly reminisce the days gone by,
      and all the memories my mind does save.
Robbed by old age, my father’s mind was shut;
   upper tree branches left to question why.
Strong and sturdy the lower branches, but
   barren branches of a willow tree die. 


June 11, 2018
Contest: Rhyme Time 4 - 10 Lines
Sponsor: Laura Loo
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Roper Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations, John, on your great 1st place win.. Lovely poem Hugs Eve ~`*
Gondolf Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 2:05 PM
Thank you so much, Eve, I appreciate it. John
Barden Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:39 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, John - blessings and best wishes for continued success, my friend! :-)
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 10:38 PM
Thanks, Greg, I appreciate it. John
Gentry Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 1:53 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this heartfelt poem about love and loss. Made me feel like I was walking in my mom's cemetery... I do feel at peace there, strangely. Well done!
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Thank you so much Susan, I appreciate your support. John
Messina Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:51 AM
Great sentimental write John! Beautifully done my friend...Congrats with your well deserved win in the contest...All the best...Charlie
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 12:13 PM
Thanks so much Charlie, I appreciate it. John
Fisher Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations! Wow! I really liked this poem! Very creative! It is one of my favorites.
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Thank you so much for your comments, Haley, I'm glad you like it. Sometimes it's hard to convey what you what to say in just 10 lines and I'm not sure everyone understood what I was saying. Thank you for the fave! John
Scars Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 6:49 AM
love those last two lines, it did it for me! great poem dear poet, thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement. Be blessed, -luloo :)
Gondolf Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thank you, Luloo, and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Macfarlane Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 5:59 PM
Wonderfully expressed words on losing a loved one. HUGS
Gondolf Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Thank you so much, Cecilia, I appreciate your comments. John
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 4:36 AM
such a glorious piece that i was there with you, john... one of your bet!...huggs
Gondolf Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 6:56 AM
Thank you, Nette, I appreciate your wonderful comments. John
Cunningham Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 7:22 AM
It's often been said trees hold many memories of time gone by, a beautiful reflection John.
Gondolf Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 9:35 AM
Thanks, Tom, I appreciate it.
Sands Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 6:44 AM
I can feel this reading it John. Well expressed :)
Gondolf Avatar
June 11, 2018 at 9:34 AM
Thank you, Heidi, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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