Barred

Billy Joe was a caring bartender
who tried to be a broken-heart mender.
But stories of woe
put him in a hole.
Now he's gone on a two-week bender.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
July 10, 2016 at 4:41 PM
I can just imagine that happening Paul - great limerick:-) hugs Jan xx
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July 10, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Thank you, Jan. You are such a sweetheart. Thanks for noting that "woe" and "hole" don't rhyme. I always learn something when we "talk." love & hugs x x x
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