Barnacle Goose's Life

Barnacle goose kid
Jumps from four hundred meters
Starts life through struggle 
To eat green grass on the shore
Mother shows- Life is thorny

April 22, 2021 
Chattogram © Mahtab Bangalee
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Pathak Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 9:31 PM
Enjoyed your Tanka, dear MB. Tankas are short and sweet, you have made this sound even more so.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 6:08 AM
And mother knows best. Short and to the point.
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