Barking Waters

Irrational waves,
An expanse of flowing wails,
Ripples woof aloud.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:51 PM
Kool Haiku Raul>>James
Goff Avatar
July 2, 2009 at 3:43 PM
sounds like a mystical 'Native American' phenomenon! cool! jim
Lopez Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 8:20 PM
sounds like your water needs a visit from the dog wisperer, ceaser M. (jsut kidding) great job with this write.:-)
Leccese Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Excellent Raul! I just love to read your Haikus. I'm not always able to comment but I sure do love them when I get the chance to read them. Keep it up. Nate
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