Barefoot Tangerine Moon

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Barefoot in luxuriant grass, luscious, pearl moonlight falling down, In the golden season of sensual thrills, in the hours without sound, Underneath the tempting tangerine tree, eating of its fragrant fruit, With the stars dancing to tomorrow, by enigmatic, invisible routes. Barefoot in peaceful dreamland, caressed softly by romantic moon, When the ebony world lies in waiting, for the yellow canary's tune, Barefoot in tangy tangerines, in the warm, soft, wandering breezes, In the darkest hours of sleepless night, when it seems time ceases.

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Joe Dimino

Date: 1/13/2023 7:56:00 AM

Amazing! Another FAVE. This one will travel on, long after we have lifted from the tactile surface of gloriously green, living, ever blossoming possibilities.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/13/2023 9:04:00 AM

I am so honored by your comments and your FAVE, Joe. Thank you very much. Blessings.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/12/2023 6:50:00 PM

I'm in awe at your creation of these masterpieces, Evelyn. Astounding, and a FAVE. Thank you! ~ Gershon

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/12/2023 8:01:00 PM

It's a real pleasure to know you enjoyed this, Gershon. I deeply appreciate your warm remarks and the FAVE. Evelyn :)

Sally Eslinger

Date: 1/12/2023 6:33:00 PM

How spectacular, Evelyn! And think, i read this while listening to a Vivaldi cello concerto! Dimensions! “enigmatic, invisible routes”. my old brain jumped new life at those word. A marvelling pen. Hugs, sally

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/12/2023 7:55:00 PM

Reading your lovely comments brings such delight, Sally. Thank you very much. Hugs, Evelyn