Barefoot In a Brook

Shingling of pebbles
hardly seen beneath water
aiding the brook’s flow

bare feet in the sand
and a sharp intake of breath
freezing stream water

dog drags her belly
she delights in this wetness
pretty autumn day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 4/29/2020 1:02:00 AM
Wow, what a refreshing 3 sets of senryus! To my faves!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/29/2020 5:51:00 AM
Thank you so much.
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