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Barefoot and Bloodied

Barefoot and bloodied I run towards the blinding light On paths of broken glass Shattered memories That I can never seem to forget- Barefoot and bloodied.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 11:26:00 PM

wow, I am really liking your poems. Let me see one more.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/10/2010 1:56:00 PM

deep on the memories not such a delight for a wond..escaping with out the pain of a memory is hard,,,gees it hurts and makes things hard when no one help you gather all them tears from the blood,,enjoyed,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/6/2010 4:49:00 PM

Sorry about the shattered memories..We all have that some in our lives..Thanks for stopping by and reading and commenting on my work..One thing that I have found about soup is that sometimes it is like mental telepathy with other writers and we do not even know each other personally..I have posted a write and another person post one at about the same time and the related topics can give one an eery feeling...This is ones that are not for a contest...Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/9/2010 12:52:00 AM

Hi Samir--although short, this sure is very gripping--I really like how it is so visual & your metaphor for shattered memories translating to broken glass was really something...enjoyed this--nikko :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2010 12:10:00 PM

I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Samir. Hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol

Rauwolfia Ra

Date: 6/2/2010 5:53:00 AM

Excellent, you couldn't have said it better, "Shattered memories", very, very well written.