Barefoot

Can the sole
striking, dragging, lifted 
still be considered weary
if just only because
allowed to stand 
and pause

This dance, a slide and lilting twist 
that bends forward in time and scale 
may numb

Skip a beat
to rather grow sore and stiff
cracking and shifting to adjust to the pressure 
measured in a smile that carries more weight than the pain
shifting the balance 
for all this moving 
forward marching 
is our greatest privilege

I'll take these necessary steps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 1:21 PM
Walking barefoot, transports us to care free days dancing on the shore of the ocean.
Lawless Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 7:17 AM
"Dance as if no one is watching"(not sure who said that)....
Saruhrosen Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Indeed! Thanks for commenting!
Haskins Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 4:33 AM
To me this poem signifies non compliance to old age and illness, a determination to carry on even when it's hard. Carry on dancing! An inspiring read.
Saruhrosen Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 4:35 AM
I'm delighted that the poem has spoken to you. Thanks for your comment!
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