Bare Limbs

winter has arrived
ill winds have despoiled the leaves~
bare limbs and branches

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Rico Leffanta

December 22, 2021 at 11:08 AM

Such scenes always made me pity the poor birds unable to see any place where they could warm their feet . . . . .it take a long time for a cup of cocoa to warm cold feet! Aloha!

Jenna Logan

December 23, 2021 at 8:48 AM

Me, too, Rico. I often wonder where the delicate creatures seek shelter. Thanks for your comments.

Mark Koplin

December 21, 2021 at 7:45 PM

Winter has reared its ugly head up here! Well done!

Jenna Logan

December 23, 2021 at 8:47 AM

I don't think I could live that far north. Thanks, Mark.

John Lawless

December 21, 2021 at 7:37 PM

yup, and when the wind blows they click like castanets. Nicely done Jenna.

Jenna Logan

December 23, 2021 at 8:46 AM

Thanks so very much, John.

Bill Baker

December 21, 2021 at 5:00 PM

Nice Haiku Jenna, Have a merry Christmas and Hugs on me, Bill

Jenna Logan

December 23, 2021 at 8:46 AM

Thanks a bunch of holly berries, Bill. Enjoy the holidays, too. Hugs.

Jan Allison

December 21, 2021 at 3:33 PM

excellent ink Jenna, very descriptive:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

December 23, 2021 at 8:46 AM

Thanks so much, Jan.

David Kavanagh

December 21, 2021 at 2:50 PM

A haiku Jenna yet I can feel a senryu embedded, human emotion runs through the very fabric of this bleak picture, extraordinary writing, cheers David

Jenna Logan

December 23, 2021 at 8:45 AM

Your insight is akin to my own. Thanks, David.

L Milton Hankins

December 21, 2021 at 1:47 PM

Beginning to experience this very thing here, Jenna, although we haven't had a good first snow yet. The limbs and branches are bare, however. I think they are anticipating!

Jenna Logan

December 21, 2021 at 2:08 PM

The sun hasn't been out here all day, but I'm not expecting snow. Thanks for the comments, Milt.