Bare Limbs

winter has arrived ill winds have despoiled the leaves~ bare limbs and branches

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Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/22/2021 11:08:00 AM

Such scenes always made me pity the poor birds unable to see any place where they could warm their feet . . . . .it take a long time for a cup of cocoa to warm cold feet! Aloha!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2021 8:48:00 AM

Me, too, Rico. I often wonder where the delicate creatures seek shelter. Thanks for your comments.

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/21/2021 7:45:00 PM

Winter has reared its ugly head up here! Well done!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2021 8:47:00 AM

I don't think I could live that far north. Thanks, Mark.

John Lawless

Date: 12/21/2021 7:37:00 PM

yup, and when the wind blows they click like castanets. Nicely done Jenna.

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so very much, John.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/21/2021 5:00:00 PM

Nice Haiku Jenna, Have a merry Christmas and Hugs on me, Bill

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks a bunch of holly berries, Bill. Enjoy the holidays, too. Hugs.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/21/2021 3:33:00 PM

excellent ink Jenna, very descriptive:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2021 8:46:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jan.

David Kavanagh

Date: 12/21/2021 2:50:00 PM

A haiku Jenna yet I can feel a senryu embedded, human emotion runs through the very fabric of this bleak picture, extraordinary writing, cheers David

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/23/2021 8:45:00 AM

Your insight is akin to my own. Thanks, David.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/21/2021 1:47:00 PM

Beginning to experience this very thing here, Jenna, although we haven't had a good first snow yet. The limbs and branches are bare, however. I think they are anticipating!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/21/2021 2:08:00 PM

The sun hasn't been out here all day, but I'm not expecting snow. Thanks for the comments, Milt.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2021 1:22:00 PM

Love the bleak winter scene you've created Jenna Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/21/2021 1:33:00 PM

That painting begs for a cup of hot chocolate in the house at the end of the lane. Thanks, Tom.