Bare Finger

His finger is really quite bare;
The ring is no longer on there,
But he's used to it now
And he sees she's a cow -
No dripping about her affair.

*dripping – beef fat or slang for whinging

for PD's contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Davis Avatar
April 13, 2014 at 12:14 PM
Jack Such a humorous and fun write. Keeps the reader smiling and entertained. Thank you for the nice comment on my Antiques poem.
Kendrick Avatar
May 10, 2013 at 6:34 PM
Congrats on your great win...Sara
Oyewole Avatar
May 9, 2013 at 11:51 AM
Congrats on your win.
Maverick Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 9:48 PM
I can think of quite a few men this write could describe Jack congratulations on its feature..'
Hendricks Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 9:21 PM
lol. Nice one, Jack. I see you took a prize in PD's contest. Well done, my friend. :)
Ryerson Avatar
May 8, 2013 at 3:04 AM
This limerick is 'dripping' with humor, Jack...Laughed so hard my eyes were 'dripping' tears (Sorry, couldn't resist) Congrats are definitely in order - Tim
Mannan Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 10:46 PM
Hahaha Many congrats for this win.
A   Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 9:29 PM
Congratulations JACK:-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
Oyewole Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 12:51 PM
Great limerick Jack... And thanks for your superlative words: "Congrats on your win" on my poems and on others. Well done sir~A.O
Dietrich Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 2:31 PM
keep coming up with funny ones about her. She deserves them!!! thanks for your many comments recently, my friend.
Haick Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 7:02 PM
I'm glad you're able to write a Limerick about this, my friend. All will be well for you, in time. .. It's her loss. And thanks for the visit. Always, Annalise
Sivey Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 5:43 PM
I see you are doing better about your situation now, if this poem is any indication! You amazed me with this clever Limerick! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
Kendrick Avatar
May 5, 2013 at 4:29 PM
Enjoyed reading your work and learning a new word..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always valuable..Sara
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