Bare Finger

His finger is really quite bare;
The ring is no longer on there,
But he's used to it now
And he sees she's a cow -
No dripping about her affair.

*dripping – beef fat or slang for whinging

for PD's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/13/2014 12:14:00 PM
Jack Such a humorous and fun write. Keeps the reader smiling and entertained. Thank you for the nice comment on my Antiques poem.
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Date: 5/10/2013 6:34:00 PM
Congrats on your great win...Sara
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Date: 5/9/2013 11:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:48:00 PM
I can think of quite a few men this write could describe Jack congratulations on its feature..'
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Date: 5/8/2013 9:21:00 PM
lol. Nice one, Jack. I see you took a prize in PD's contest. Well done, my friend. :)
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Date: 5/8/2013 3:04:00 AM
This limerick is 'dripping' with humor, Jack...Laughed so hard my eyes were 'dripping' tears (Sorry, couldn't resist) Congrats are definitely in order - Tim
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Date: 5/7/2013 10:46:00 PM
Hahaha Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:29:00 PM
Congratulations JACK:-) thanks for taking your time entering my contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 5/7/2013 12:51:00 PM
Great limerick Jack... And thanks for your superlative words: "Congrats on your win" on my poems and on others. Well done sir~A.O
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Date: 5/6/2013 2:31:00 PM
keep coming up with funny ones about her. She deserves them!!! thanks for your many comments recently, my friend.
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Date: 5/5/2013 7:02:00 PM
I'm glad you're able to write a Limerick about this, my friend. All will be well for you, in time. .. It's her loss. And thanks for the visit. Always, Annalise
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:43:00 PM
I see you are doing better about your situation now, if this poem is any indication! You amazed me with this clever Limerick! What a tremendous piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 5/5/2013 4:29:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work and learning a new word..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always valuable..Sara
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