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We placed every bar for our children to touch, If it is too hard, it could be too much, We will drop it for our kids to start, And grow their green minds, spirit to impart. 2020 January 05

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Date: 1/5/2020 9:15:00 PM
I like thinking of their “green minds”.
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Date: 1/5/2020 9:49:00 PM
Me too Caren--thanks!~@wk

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