Bar Dance: Footle

Bar Dance
In Trance

Sam's Hot
She's Not

 I Hate
His Date

He's Cute
Big Brute

They Sit
I'm Lit



Alexis Y.

10-23-16

Inspired by the footle contest.

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

October 27, 2016 at 2:44 PM

Thoroughly enjoyable poem, Alexis. You got this footle form down pat. Great imagery. Love you, dear. RW

Afzal Nusker

October 23, 2016 at 10:09 PM

Your Footles are amazing, Alexis. I love this one.

Carolyn Devonshire

October 23, 2016 at 1:56 PM

Got a good chuckle reading abut Sam's not-so-hot date. No mincing words here, Alexis. "I hate his date" says it all. A fun footle for the contest. Wishing you success!

Alexis Y.

October 23, 2016 at 2:02 PM

Hi Carolyn, Thank you so much. You shoul just see her. I appreciate that you stopped by. PS, This footle is all in fun. The one I entered the contest is the contest name:')Alexis

Afolabi Muideen

October 23, 2016 at 12:59 PM

Reading this form wants me to give it a try. I love the read...........A.M.

Alexis Y.

October 23, 2016 at 1:39 PM

Hi AM, It's nice to see you. The form is not easy as it looks. But once you write one you get the hang of it. Go for it. I know you can do it. I appreciate that you stopped by :-) Alexis

Jan Allison

October 23, 2016 at 10:10 AM

LOL Alexis I told you this form is addictive lol You did a great job I can't wait to read the actual contest entries:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

October 23, 2016 at 10:21 AM

Hi Jan, You were right . This form is addictive. You're gonna love the contest entries:-) Alexis

Charmaine Chircop

October 23, 2016 at 9:14 AM

I hate his date too..lol: )Really enjoyed this sweet lady.

Lim'Rik Flats

October 23, 2016 at 8:06 AM

Yay! Alexis got bit by the footle bug. I be chucklin — my favorite thing in the morning, well, after coffee;-) Thanks kid — good stuff! Huggerlys ~j

Alexis Y.

October 23, 2016 at 8:48 AM

Hi John, I did git bit by the footle bug. Thanks for such an awesome comment. Yesterday you did tell me to write another. This is my third one, you missed one. I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis