Bar Code 1964

See you later mom meeting him at "Mass" tonight bar code used to be. Kathy Collins

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Karl Marszalowicz

Date: 3/23/2014 3:53:00 AM

you've got my interest though far from peaked without more. That's the way a lot of your poems go and the bottom line is I want more! there is so much you can do I know it so if at first you feel dry try putting a poem aside for a couple days or more, sit on it (not literally) and have patience, am I right? I am doing that right now with a line "I sleep with my eyes open" comments?

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/23/2014 7:28:00 AM

Karl - you are a dear and full of wise counsel. I know you are right, but I get so wrapped up in wanting to post, I don't take the time to reflect a little more. Patience is hard to come by in my little brain. lvoe, Kathy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/16/2014 12:01:00 PM

Hi Kathryn :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/17/2014 8:07:00 AM

Thank you Linda and a good week to you too. love, Kathy

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/15/2014 10:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it, kathryn

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/17/2014 8:07:00 AM

Thank you for your thoughtfulness, Ram. Kathy

Daver Austin

Date: 3/11/2014 1:02:00 PM

1964 was a long time ago. Wonder what happened after mass. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/13/2014 11:10:00 AM

there was no after mass since i never made it there. It only feels a long time ago, when I see it written. love, Kathy

Skat A

Date: 3/11/2014 10:18:00 AM

Kathryn, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~

Kathryn Collins
Date: 3/13/2014 11:10:00 AM

Thanks Skat Kathy