Bar Code 1964

See you later mom
meeting him at "Mass" tonight
bar code used to be. 

Kathy Collins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 23, 2014 at 3:53 AM
you've got my interest though far from peaked without more. That's the way a lot of your poems go and the bottom line is I want more! there is so much you can do I know it so if at first you feel dry try putting a poem aside for a couple days or more, sit on it (not literally) and have patience, am I right? I am doing that right now with a line "I sleep with my eyes open" comments?
Collins Avatar
March 23, 2014 at 7:28 AM
Karl - you are a dear and full of wise counsel. I know you are right, but I get so wrapped up in wanting to post, I don't take the time to reflect a little more. Patience is hard to come by in my little brain. lvoe, Kathy
A   Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 12:01 PM
Hi Kathryn :) It was nice to see your poem featured in the poetry soups, home page this past week. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever *LINDA
Collins Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Thank you Linda and a good week to you too. love, Kathy
Mehta Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:09 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Read and enjoyed it, kathryn
Collins Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 8:07 AM
Thank you for your thoughtfulness, Ram. Kathy
Austin Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 1:02 PM
1964 was a long time ago. Wonder what happened after mass. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Collins Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 11:10 AM
there was no after mass since i never made it there. It only feels a long time ago, when I see it written. love, Kathy
A  Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 10:18 AM
Kathryn, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. I'm always enjoying The Soups top picks of the week. Take Care ~SKAT~
Collins Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Thanks Skat Kathy
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