Baqreid the 2nd Eid

This day to celebrate the supreme sacrifice
of the ancient prophet Abraham
This day to ponder and reminisce
that divine substitution of Ismail for a ram! 

This Quranic and biblical factual story
shall never diminish in its age-old glory

That superb reliance on and compliance with the will of God
eternally for man to learn from and applaud.

Upon his awesome trust in the unseen, let his kind marvel
and of submission, devotion to God bestow him a laurel

And now for the sake of mutual unity and festivity
first let all of humanity
release their doves of peace
and let them fly freely, unprovoked, unrestrained
with olive branches in their beaks

such that when angels who predicted
forever feuding humans
look down they see instead
6 billion or more two fingers up
in a huge mass of humanity
signalling for and meaning to keep the peace! 

But mind you, world peace is to be everybody's goal
so let no one leave space for any loop-hole.
EID GREETINGS everybody.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/23/2016 11:07:00 AM
now i think i should've been on soup earlier, didn't like the fact that i missed out on some poems...excellent write Zaynub...excellent
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Date: 10/15/2015 10:03:00 AM
True.Peace,divinity,happiness is what humanity needs.Beautiful poetry.You deserve many kudos.
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Date: 10/9/2015 8:46:00 AM
I put my two fingers up. Warm thoughts, Ralph
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/9/2015 1:08:00 PM
Aw thanx soo much Ralph, peace n regards.
Date: 10/4/2015 4:59:00 PM
Upon his awesome trust in the unseen, let his kind marvel and of submission, devotion to God bestow him a laurel......a very good idea S.zaynub and of course a Fav of mine......A.M.
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Date: 10/4/2015 4:54:00 PM
This day to celebrate the supreme sacrifice of the ancient prophet Abraham This day to ponder and reminisce that divine substitution of Ismail for a ram! for to yield to such dream, He was indeed a great man. God himself is love and this love he shows for substituted Ismail for an arrogant or snobby ram who don't has a mouth to praise. This day to ponder and reminisce for this indicated that He created human to praise and humble their wings to him.............A.M.
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Date: 10/3/2015 10:31:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this S.zaynub. I love how this was constructed with passion of love, this festival is indeed of peace and love. A well and eloquent write........A.M.
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Date: 10/3/2015 12:23:00 AM
Zinoub-- I have to be impartial. They are some furious creatures. If the ram was entangled in a bramble bush and thorns prevented it from running means not it was meant for the alter. If it came and lay on the alter then I could understand the sacrifice. And had I been Abraham I would say Oh Glorious God my son so young and I so old take me instead after all I left him in the desert to die once so please take me. Any how nice poem for your faith. Lots of love here.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/3/2015 2:09:00 AM
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 10/3/2015 2:09:00 AM
Hi and what faith r u? I tink when God speaks to u then u know what He is doing and wont let any unfair ting happen to His beloved innocent as H. Ibrahim was u see. Thanx for yer coment, made me giggle
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