Baptize

Moonlight passage leads to river of devotion bare feet gather here in waves of fluid motion holy infatuation. For Contest : Tanka Date: 7-8-18

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Line Gauthier

Date: 7/31/2018 8:48:00 PM

Good one, Casarah. Congrats on your win.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/17/2018 3:07:00 AM

Sincere congratulations on your win in the Tanka Contest, Casarah - all the best for many more successes, my friend - nicely done! :-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/16/2018 3:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! Well written and creative.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/16/2018 1:16:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 6st place in the contest, Casarah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2018 6:29:00 PM

wow, what a wonderful way to put the two words into a tanka! the last line is genius.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/9/2018 8:56:00 AM

This Tanka has a nice flow, Casarah.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2018 8:16:00 AM

Love it!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/9/2018 7:51:00 AM

You've painted a lovely picture, Casarah! Janice

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/9/2018 1:58:00 AM

and yes sometimes little is more!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/9/2018 1:57:00 AM

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:12:00 AM

:) :)

Lyric Man

Date: 7/8/2018 9:53:00 PM

Cas.. Love this moonlit, river write that flows into that perfect last line.. so subtly sensual!

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:11:00 AM

Thank you x

Eve Roper

Date: 7/8/2018 8:08:00 PM

Very good, Casarah, I love the movement of the poem. Hugs Eve

Casarah Nance
Date: 7/9/2018 6:10:00 AM

:) Thank you Eve.