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\\\|| FIRE L I G /\/\/\ H T itself ~ baptised ~~ ***** ***** |||| **** ***** my forsaken body ************* +++ ********* R \\/ \/ \\ // \/ D R /\ /\/\/\/\/// E \\/\/\ E E /\//\\/\/\/// D \\\/\/\/ +++ R \\ D /\/\/\/\/// +++ red became a ;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;......::::::::’’’’””””””” ;;;;;;;;;;; ::::: mer “”””” “”””” ;;;;;;;;;;shim ing “””””” “””””””””””””””..............:::::::;;;;;;;;~~~~~~.........__~~~~ ~~~~~~ ~~~~~~ ¥¥¥ ~~ P A C I F I C ~~~~~~~ <><><><><> purple Poseidon emerged with tears ^^^ sirens shatter !!! to bathe ^^^^^ my own ^^^^ ^^^ ~ Odysseus blinked ^^^^~~~ < compassion ===> L A S T r /\//////\|||Ays ////\\||+++ of []{}[]{} ||***||** |||** +++ **SUN ****||* ****||**||[][]{} embalming my shoulders with Hmmm HIS Umm lacy OM t r a om OM v e ls Alpha ___> _____Omega

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Date: 8/7/2025 6:47:00 PM
This is an absolute feast for the senses—part poem, part painting, part oceanic dreamscape. The imagery crashes and swirls like waves, carrying myth, color, and emotion all at once. It’s wild, layered, and mesmerizing… like a tide you can’t look away from.
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Date: 8/6/2025 5:16:00 PM
wow, I'm impressed with your ability and patience. I admire what you did here...enjoy your evening, Sara
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Ghairo Daniels
Date: 8/6/2025 5:53:00 PM
THANKYOU for pop-in & feedback, Sara. Joys returned for your evening.x.

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