Baptism

Water rushes past my face 
 Coolness and chills sink in 
Goosebumps pop and hair raises
 On this brand new skin 
The warmth of the breeze hits me
I feel it's breath, it's near 
Passes by my shoulders 
Hits me in my ears 
 Sun reflects off the ripples
 It blinds me, hits my eyes 
Orbs and halos fill my vision
When I look up to the sky 
 I sometimes gulp the water 
Salt dissolves on my tongue
The crystals dance inside my mouth 
To a song I've never sung
 I lie in the caressing water 
I lie there carelessly 
Floating to a good place 
That God has meant for me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 30, 2014 at 7:29 PM
My wife and I where Baptised together, a wonderful experience. I do like the location of your baptism, it sounds like a slice of heaven.
Leake Avatar
November 22, 2014 at 1:49 PM
Lauren, Enjoyed this poem, it is so nice to feel fresh, especially for little ones with new skin. T|ake care kevin
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