Banzai Ghazal She Laughed In My Eye

Banzai ghazal she laughed in my eye


One hurried night my tongue slipped on a banana peel
She thought I was faking it, and walked away

I asked for a reprieve, a meeting of the minds
She looked at me, puzzled as  to why I was talking in the plural

It never got better, even though I saw her mocking our ecstasy in her poems
I laughed, I thought she was faking it  

Oh baby I need you, like a flower stretches to the sun
I laughed at the fake ******

Most of it was my fault, I agree, so I extended an olive branch
She said she had better things to do

Then I offered coffee and a roll
She thought I was talking dirty

She must of thought I was aiming to get in her oven
She might have been right, only thing her oven was already in use

I now scratch my head as to where I went wrong
She scratches her's too as to where I went right

connie pachecho

2/2/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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February 3, 2017 at 1:47 PM
baby dont fret. this is for contest. think of all the dividends i can win. sorry its at your expense. Love you.
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February 3, 2017 at 2:57 PM
connies a clown, babe. you know that.. irregardless of the contest i'd take you, just saying.
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February 3, 2017 at 1:51 PM
baby, i lose. we're back to square one. just saying. Love you.
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