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thunder roars from the restless sky homeless man with intense hunger pangs 03/25/2023

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Date: 4/4/2023 12:54:00 PM
so sadly true!
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Date: 3/30/2023 6:54:00 AM
- Well done, Alexis - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/27/2023 4:58:00 AM
Great Bantu Alexis, best wishes
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Date: 3/26/2023 12:47:00 PM
The rumbling of thunder and the rumbling of a hungry stomach match extremely well, Alexis. A fitting example of this short poetry form. ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 3/26/2023 9:25:00 AM
Unfortunately is too real...
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Date: 3/26/2023 6:27:00 AM
Excellent poem Alexis. Very well written :)
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Date: 3/26/2023 5:41:00 AM
Good luck in the contest my friend and wow powerful words to describe what a homeless hungry man had to now go through. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/25/2023 8:03:00 PM
Wow, this is a deep Bantu, Alexis. Really mind-stimulating. Good luck with the contest
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Date: 3/25/2023 6:15:00 PM
Skillfully done!
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Date: 3/25/2023 5:59:00 PM
wow it tells the whole story here, and a sad one at that. :(
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Date: 3/25/2023 5:43:00 PM
Wow, this is a profound Bantu, Alexis. Very thought provoking.
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Date: 3/25/2023 4:01:00 PM
Your stirring poem is quite vivid and dynamic, Alexis. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)
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Date: 3/25/2023 1:11:00 PM
Certainly, a thunderous Bandu like that may win the day, dearest Alexis. Good luck, my loving friend. Hugs xxx
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:50:00 AM
I agree with Michelle Alexis , The image you created is so strong and powerful!! Hope your weekend is great !!!
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Date: 3/25/2023 11:43:00 AM
Powerful image, Alexis, very timely, best wishes for the contest~
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