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Bantu

thunder roars from the restless sky
                    homeless man with intense hunger pangs

















03/25/2023

Copyright © Alexis Y. | Year Posted 2023

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Andrea Dietrich

April 4, 2023 at 12:54 PM

so sadly true!

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 30, 2023 at 6:54 AM

- Well done, Alexis - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

March 27, 2023 at 4:58 AM

Great Bantu Alexis, best wishes

March 26, 2023 at 12:47 PM

The rumbling of thunder and the rumbling of a hungry stomach match extremely well, Alexis. A fitting example of this short poetry form. ~ Best regards // paul

March 26, 2023 at 9:25 AM

Unfortunately is too real...

March 26, 2023 at 6:27 AM

Excellent poem Alexis. Very well written :)

Jennifer Proxenos

March 26, 2023 at 5:41 AM

Good luck in the contest my friend and wow powerful words to describe what a homeless hungry man had to now go through. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

March 25, 2023 at 8:03 PM

Wow, this is a deep Bantu, Alexis. Really mind-stimulating. Good luck with the contest

March 25, 2023 at 6:15 PM

Skillfully done!

Mystic Rose Rose

March 25, 2023 at 5:59 PM

wow it tells the whole story here, and a sad one at that. :(

March 25, 2023 at 5:43 PM

Wow, this is a profound Bantu, Alexis. Very thought provoking.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

March 25, 2023 at 4:01 PM

Your stirring poem is quite vivid and dynamic, Alexis. Best of wishes, Evelyn :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 25, 2023 at 1:11 PM

Certainly, a thunderous Bandu like that may win the day, dearest Alexis. Good luck, my loving friend. Hugs xxx

March 25, 2023 at 11:50 AM

I agree with Michelle Alexis , The image you created is so strong and powerful!! Hope your weekend is great !!!

Michelle Faulkner

March 25, 2023 at 11:43 AM

Powerful image, Alexis, very timely, best wishes for the contest~

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