Bantu

Shadows shimmer on Spring day stroll.
Tree branches fall on sun-bathed pavement.

3/24/2023
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Subimal Sinha-Roy

March 24, 2023 at 11:15 PM

Nicely penned, Kim. Thought provoking.

Kim Rodrigues

March 25, 2023 at 3:32 AM

Thank you so much, Subimal!

Daniel Turner

March 24, 2023 at 7:47 PM

Only until the leaves come out:) Very nice, Kim. I had to read it a couple of times:)

Kim Rodrigues

March 24, 2023 at 8:41 PM

Thank you, Daniel!

Charlotte Puddifoot

March 24, 2023 at 1:40 PM

i like the alliteration in this..makes me wish for sunnier days.:)

Kim Rodrigues

March 24, 2023 at 2:40 PM

Thank you, sweet poet, for noticing the aliteration! xx

Michelle Faulkner

March 24, 2023 at 12:35 PM

Beautiful, especially 'shadows shimmer' - feels like spring to me ~

Kim Rodrigues

March 24, 2023 at 12:41 PM

Yay! Glad for Spring! Thank you, Michelle!

Andrea Dietrich

March 24, 2023 at 12:07 PM

It's sure fun to read this one's with the great imagery.

Kim Rodrigues

March 24, 2023 at 12:40 PM

Thank you so much, my friend! Something I noticed yesterday! Nothing like a great nature walk! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

March 24, 2023 at 9:31 AM

Glorious imagery, dearest Kim. Good luck!

Kim Rodrigues

March 24, 2023 at 12:40 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!

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