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Shadows shimmer on Spring day stroll. Tree branches fall on sun-bathed pavement. 3/24/2023 Write BANTUs Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney

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Date: 3/24/2023 11:15:00 PM

Nicely penned, Kim. Thought provoking.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2023 3:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Subimal!

Date: 3/24/2023 7:47:00 PM

Only until the leaves come out:) Very nice, Kim. I had to read it a couple of times:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 8:41:00 PM

Thank you, Daniel!

Date: 3/24/2023 1:40:00 PM

i like the alliteration in this..makes me wish for sunnier days.:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 2:40:00 PM

Thank you, sweet poet, for noticing the aliteration! xx

Date: 3/24/2023 12:35:00 PM

Beautiful, especially 'shadows shimmer' - feels like spring to me ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 12:41:00 PM

Yay! Glad for Spring! Thank you, Michelle!

Date: 3/24/2023 12:07:00 PM

It's sure fun to read this one's with the great imagery.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 12:40:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend! Something I noticed yesterday! Nothing like a great nature walk! :)

Date: 3/24/2023 9:31:00 AM

Glorious imagery, dearest Kim. Good luck!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2023 12:40:00 PM

Thank you, Demetrios!