Bantu

The doors of the crowded train open
The spillways of the dam are unlocked.

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March 24, 2023
Contest : Write Bantus
Sponsored by : Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Richards Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win with this excellent match of images.
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 8:08 AM
I see this one clearly Subimal. Congratulations on your win! :)
Turner Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 2:53 PM
Congratulations, Subimal on your winning bantu. Brilliant bantu:)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 3:35 PM
Very nice…indeed the people spill out in droves!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 24, 2023 at 9:51 PM
Thank you, Kim. This is a normal sight in many metropolitan cities.
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