Bantu

A sea mist rolls inshore this morning
The optician proposes a cataract op
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Dietrich Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 9:13 AM
VERY nicely done. This form suits you. Congrats
Richards Avatar
April 8, 2023 at 4:29 AM
I liked the intellectual response to nature (per my previous comment). Congratulations on your 1st place win, Brian.
Fowler Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 8:06 AM
I like this one Brian - congratulations on your win! :)
Mcintosh Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 1:15 AM
Wonderful. Love it. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina
Mohn Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 7:33 PM
great contrast Brian...congrats!
Turner Avatar
April 6, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Excellent metaphor, Brian. Congratulations on your winning bantu.
Richards Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 3:16 AM
This is a very deep one. I like it, Brian
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