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Bantu

A sea mist rolls inshore this morning The optician proposes a cataract op

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Date: 4/8/2023 9:13:00 AM
VERY nicely done. This form suits you. Congrats
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Date: 4/8/2023 4:29:00 AM
I liked the intellectual response to nature (per my previous comment). Congratulations on your 1st place win, Brian.
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Date: 4/7/2023 8:06:00 AM
I like this one Brian - congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/7/2023 1:15:00 AM
Wonderful. Love it. God bless you and congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 4/6/2023 7:33:00 PM
great contrast Brian...congrats!
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Date: 4/6/2023 2:49:00 PM
Excellent metaphor, Brian. Congratulations on your winning bantu.
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Date: 3/23/2023 3:16:00 AM
This is a very deep one. I like it, Brian
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Date: 3/23/2023 2:42:00 AM
Good one :)
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