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Bantu

Neighbor's gossip carried like stones in the wind.
 Glass houses shatter.

3/22/23
Contest: Write Bantus Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney

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Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

April 25, 2023 at 1:15 AM

When a best friend turn out to be a spy, Burning sun increasing its volume Well said. Good luck in the Contest

Tania Kitchin

April 25, 2023 at 3:45 AM

Thank you

Paula Goldsmith

April 6, 2023 at 11:11 AM

Few words with much said. So True. Have a blessed day............

Tania Kitchin

April 6, 2023 at 5:46 PM

Paula, thank you.

Alexis Y.

March 25, 2023 at 7:28 PM

WoW! Tania, You have penned a good entry for the contest. I think you nailed it, both lines are so well written. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend;-) Alexis

Tania Kitchin

March 26, 2023 at 3:43 AM

Alexis, thank you.